literature

Time Stood Still.

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When I first saw you
time stood still
now I don't know what to do
'cause I heard you popped a pill

I love you too much
to see your life in the trash
but it seems our ends never touch
and you're always on the hash

I recall the night
I first gave you a kiss
it filled me with delight
but now im no longer filled with bliss

I try to find a way
to tell you how much it stings
to see you throw your life away
along with your angel wings

These words I can't find
no matter how hard i try
it seems that they are in a bind
so it seems you'll never fly

Your bright golden halo
has now become brass
and you've sunk very low
your feet almost on the grass

I'm not sure how to say
how much you mean to me
so the price I must pay
is this the way it has to be?

Why can't everything
go back to the way it was
when my checker you did king
and you never worried about the fuzz

Memories only make me cry
but I treasure every last one
and will till i die
'cause we had so much fun

On the playground we swung
and went down the slide
on the monkey bars we hung
and laughed till we cried

We watched movies till dusk
held hands all night long
remember that day I tried to walk you to your bus?
nothing ever seemed to go wrong

Now we rarely talk
and when we do it's not for long
to my house you never walk
and you'll never hear this song

~less than / three
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lostinmyworld's avatar
This is a very powerful poem. It has so much emotion in it and just reading it you can feel that it is written straight from the heart. The rhymes are great. Only critic for this on is the second to last stanza where you say:
"remember that day I tried to walk you to your bus?"
that line is kinda out. if it would be shorter the poem would be perfect. :) :hug: